Some nice fantasy writing here, Justice! Are there two dragons... Ellen and Ember? Or am I just a little confused. Maybe I need to read this again hehe. I think your story would benefit from some dialogue (something I have learned myself to add now!) and show don't tell to draw the reader into the story more so that they don't sit so much on the periphery as an observer, and to bring out more of the emotion and connection. This was nevertheless a good read.
I found your story in Dreemport this evening #dreemerforlife
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Thank you so much. I guess there's always room for improvement innit
I think you write wonderfully. You have a creative mind and talent! Have you ever read this article in the Inkwell? I refer to it from time to time myself...
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/catalog-of-fiction-writing-tips-from-the-ink-well