didn't seem right
I would have been highly disappointed with that. You are telling their love story without having to get graphic and you are great at it.
There is an old movie called an Affair to Remember that had me sobbing when I saw the end. I have never gotten that emotional from a movie ever. There was not one erotic scene in the movie and it didn't need one. Same with your story.
Yep, I think these people are old-fashioned, they love romance, manners, courtesy and respect. They are private and happy to reside within the love they share. I'll write about them again I think.
I REALLY hope you do. I love their story. You do both of them justice in your writing.
Thank you kindly.