Okay... so this was seriously intense.
You managed to compress what could possibly be a whole chapter of tension into 240 characters. Well done!
Very Brilliant. Hopefully the narrator truly is fully prepared.
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Thanks, @zeraton! I love the challenge of getting the most drama out of the fewest characters.
And I hope she got in the most swings with that bat and then gets the heck out of that situation for good.