Its a matter of time
Mind racing
Too much is a crime
Stillness
Where action matters
Brainless
Life in the gutters
Empty
Like flowing gentle water
Slipping slightly
Holding dark matter
Elegance in its beauty
Elegance in its void
Elegance in its waiting
Elegance in its stop
Looking back
Face pictured like yesterday
No visible crack
If only, you'd not stared away
Too late
There is no turning round
Empty fate
Voice fading to no sound
Tears
They fall on saddened canvas
Too late you have no ears
Memories gone, moments pass
Was there no thought in the action
Was there no inkling of others reaction
Was there no consequence in the intention
Was there no feeling of others affection
Was there no right or wrong direction
Was there no fear of redemption
Not sure why I wrote this poem other than the inspiration came from this post by @davidbright.
Thanks for your time
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Cos you rich.
This is absolutely amazing. You wrote this beautifully.. I'm glad I was able to inspire you. Guess what? You just inspired me also.. Thanks so much for sharing this poem.
This really got to me.
Thank you, your poem was good
Thanks so much.. I appreciate
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Sheesh, these two lines still gave me goosebumps every time I read it. Beautiful, as powerful as can be.
Love the way you played with words on this. The lines in between read another message with the short phrase, single word. Nicely penned.
Thank you.
I'm glad you actually picked up on the double meaning in between the main composition. I was scared it was getting too ambitious.