You lost me.
When you held her hand instead of mine
Your souls been intertwined
And here I am shocked by the news
Cause you'd be tying the knot in a month or two
I've written countless songs for you
Songs of love, longing, heartbreak and in blues
I promised myself to not make no more
Yet now I feel the need to
I've loved you for so long yet you didn't gave me chance
And so I was broken, did things God couldn't understand
But a few years went by and I met this guy
And all of the sudden he turned my grey skies into white
I loved him so dearly, and I would want him forever
But when I saw you getting married to a girl that I never knew you would come to love
I felt numb and depressed whatsoever
I was in the verge of crying, my heart almost stopped
But there is nothing I could do
I hate seeing you happy, I really do
Cause that proposal could've been me and you
But you didn't chose me, and neither did I chose you.
You lost me.
This is quite neat! I like how it spans a longer time of years, rather than just describing one brief little moment. Also I love the brutal honesty of "I hate seeing you happy, I really do." That's somethin' else.
Really nice!
Thank you so much for the appreciation! 😍 This was my first love and I've loved him for about 7 years straight. Hahaha but we never got together though. Guess he didn't liked me at all.
And yeah I really hated his smile when I saw his post about the proposal. Hahahahaha
Oof... that sounds rough. Sorry you had to deal with that. ❤️🩹
Its totally fine 😅 That was years ago already. Also, I got my own man right now and I love him so much. Its just that the “first love never dies” thing really does not fade away that easily even if you’re in a relationship. 😅