Ah, the horror, it's beautiful. Not everyday I come across poetic prose so this is a real treat to read! And well done, too. The character arc was predictable, but in a good way, the way expected from body horror. It was as it should have been and that's what made it immersive. The rhyming kept the flow and pacing going steady and it sounded like the character was long gone with madness, which amplifies the voice. Love it.
!PIZZA
I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you so much for the feedback! :)