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Absence weighs heavier in the stillness,
where silence embraces darkness,
the shadows dance with slowness,
and the moon watches with dignity.
The stars whisper secrets,
in a sky of velvet and solitude,
distant whispers, discreet echoes,
your voice is lost in the immensity.
The world rests in its sweet calm,
and the wind caresses a fleeting dream,
while my heart, without your soul,
beats lonely, to the beat of a voracious farewell.
Absence settles in my thoughts,
like a weight that oppresses mercilessly,
and in the dark background of these moments,
my sadness blooms in loneliness.
I always enjoy some personification and here your moon and stars are transformed into silent witnesses. I think your technique has added depth and enriched your piece.