Thank you, @owasco. I'm always happy when you read one of my stories or poems. I haven't quite worked out what I'm doing with the broken syntax. Here it works because it reflects who Katt was, to an extent. But I've played with it in several poems now. I think, maybe, it's an attempt to break away from logic and just get at the feeling. Thanks again for reading. :)
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
It works beautifully for me. I don't know what happened, but I do know a feeling very well. You pack a lot into a very few words. You write poems (and stories) that leave me with time to think about them.