LET OUR LIPS TALK

[davidbright]

Let our lips talk,
Let mine hold yours like a conversation.
The feelings that will bring demons out of a demonstration.
A galaxy in my ecstasy; the star to my starvation;
Kiss of the Dragon; let our fiery fire flame to cremation.

Smooches in the air, can you feel the air pollution?
As we transfer these flowery feelings like a cross-pollination,
The soft smooth strokes of this locomotion;
The motion of emotion.

Affecting our lips is the true affection,
Paying close checks to our closed eyes the real attention.
Let it wash us away; Let it be our ablution
Until we're out of this world like eviction.

Let mine hold yours like an absorption,
Let it drive us crazy till it becomes our sane transportation.
The best addiction; Our worst distraction,
Let our lips talk, and let's hold a conversation.

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Comments

[emptyintentions]

My favorite line “ The feelings that will bring demons out of a demonstration.”

[davidbright]

😂 😂 😂... There are so many other lines I would have loved to add to this but am just trying to be very careful. I don't know if the community won't like it

[emptyintentions]

Lol well, don’t let judgement stifle your creativity. When it was still steemit people were cool with content like that. It is art after all.

[davidbright]

Sure.. But there isn't anyway you won't be cautious of these things although I understand what you mean.

Thanks for this.. M

[lecumberre]

A frank invitation with lips, words... Good poem.

[davidbright]

Thanks so much sir

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[emrysjobber]

I must say, I like your use of words. "Smooches in the air, can you feel the air pollution?" You have polluted this platform with this lovely writing 😁😁😁

[davidbright]

😂 😂 😂... You made me smile.. Thanks for that... I was just trying to be creative

[joseitosanchezs]

Very nice poem my friend, I loved this part:

The best addiction; Our worst distraction,
Let our lips talk, and let's hold a conversation.

Hugs ♥

[davidbright]

Thanks so much.. I appreciate the hug