Sing me the song as you in past sang
Melodious it was with your unique slang
I want to hear it again from your curved lips
Voice of your sweet lies
Making me belief that dreams are always flowers and butterflies.
Sing me the song of our endless nights
Where we both lie in each other arms
As time stopped then and there
Entangled in our kiss.
The memories like these I most miss
But I never knew that betrayal was in your blood
I never knew that you leaving me will cause an inside flood
Flood of despair, anger, loneliness and a total stranger.
Stranger to the hate that would follow
Stranger to insomnia, Stranger to tomorrow.
I tried to move on
Started every day with a fake smile
But by the end of the day I was drunk
While I roam in nothingness.
I became weird and vile.
Now I wonder what a fool I was
To make you my love,
Now I know that it was all false
You were just making a bluff
Sing me my last song
Before I descent to hell
Sing me my mistakes
Sing me your name
And if you ever want to save me
Come back at my grave, my lady,
Even from hell, I will love you madly.
Nothing like being betrayed by a love one, realising you never really knew them at all.
Well written my friend xxxx
You are right.. It's really painful being in such situation. I pray we don't find ourselves in one.
Thanks so much for your feedback ma'am. I appreciate
I wonder if I would react the same way as the poem's persona if my love were to betray me.
Great transition and narrative.
You really won't know what you can do until you find yourself in these shoes. You might even react more that the poem's persona... 😂
Sound verses of love, a shared song, The melodies of intertwined romances sound in tango of passion and pain, just as love is.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
It's just as love is... Thanks so much for your feedback
Nice one dear. It's lovely he still crave for her presence after the betrayal.
It's still mystery to me how sometimes we still end up loving that one person that is always betraying us. I hope to understand this soon.
Beyond what happened and the dark feeling that tore your soul there is a poetic sensibility that defines you and my advice is that if she betrayed your love she betrayed herself. Thank you for sharing. Happy journey. Cheers and greetings.
I have never thought of it this way; her betraying herself and I think you are right. Thanks for pointing that out..
When she sees him in the distance she will realize that she betrayed a pure love and that is self betrayal. Thank you for sharing. Cheers and best regards.
You are on point... Thanks for your contribution.
Deep.
It hurts when you love someone and betrayal breaks it.
The anger and love in you battles together bringing out unplaced emotions.
Nice poem dear.
I am glad you understand the poem perfectly.
Thanks so much for contribution which indeed is a powerful one. I appreciate
You are welcome dear.
I enjoyed reading this.