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RE: Bodies ... 2 very short original poems

in Blockchain Poets3 years ago

That's a heck of a picture you found.

Both of these are excellent. Well done. You captured a lot of meaning in just a few lines. I especially like the second. It makes me think of the old saying "We are not bodies with a spirit, we are spirits that temporarily have a body".

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Thank you, for your warm appreciation, friend. As a lover of Haiku, @dbooster, I can see how you'd appreciate concise, evocative phrasing. Yes, I fully agree about how we are spiritual beings having a human experience... As Leonard Cohen puts it: We are so lightly here...


Such a great song! (well, anything Leonard Cohen wrote was good).