Can I just point out firstly that I love the rhymes? It almost felt like I was listening to a rap verse in my head🙂😅. Really nice work. Is the poem about breakup or someone about to commit suicide? I'm not quite sure about that
Can I just point out firstly that I love the rhymes? It almost felt like I was listening to a rap verse in my head🙂😅. Really nice work. Is the poem about breakup or someone about to commit suicide? I'm not quite sure about that
Not suicidal but yes it is of a break up... I see how you can feel its like a rap verse though, a lot of my writings kinda seem as such, thanks for reading