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RE: I won't panic [poetry]

however for a while, take a pause,
allow matters shatter, allow them to make a chaos,
however do not allow chaos take vicinity to your mind,
Be like a lotus, even among the mud, pass shine

This line got my attention, if we let matters shatter won't that be disastrous, "chaos" in the first instance, y we get so worried at times is because we don't want matters to escalate not talk of allowing it to make a chaos.

The last line, be like a lotus, it is a awesome fiction character in the poem because in life we owe ourselves the right to smile despite the hardships.

Nice write up.

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Thanks alot..

I believe smiling helps alot to stay young.