You are always there for fun
Like a black spot after staring at the sun
Like a tiny beacon of hope
I could hear your whispers
Showing me things
Like those I've never known
Rivers flowing from one drop of rain
As my heart aches with so much pain
You're not in my arms
You're not even in my sight
You're my first and last thought at night
Looking at your legs to your hair
It's skipped a beat and my heart is bare
In your hands like a vice squeezing hard
For you, I'd play any of my reserved cards
Not much if anything I hide from you
not many hours apart we spend but maybe a few
Sleep is long, lonely but luckily only for a few
waiting for mornings waking up next to you
The day is still so far off, yet waiting's not that hard
The price is well worth the wait at any length.
For you there's no limit I wouldn't wait
No price I wouldn't pay, forever is not far away.
I felt a change in mood from the beginning to end, like a positive contrasted to a negative and the feeling got darker but then reversed and ended positively
Yes, it's a hard long distance relationship. It doesn't have to be but we are doing it on purpose for now. It sucks but it's making desire so much deeper and knowledge of each other much deeper too, so not all is lost
I read this and feel it could be written about a person you are already with, or someone you long to be with… not fully clear, but either way i dig it.