Ok this time, it's maths -- four haikus, and I've added a fourth line of one. Math is a funny agreement we have with (god). Peace.
speck grabbidy wave
Sink hole thirteen winchester
Will it was it done
Shot
The line pulls down crown
No delay would be prudent
A pair of sixes
Diced
Jeez what a wonder
the paths towards humans just
Might, bring us upright
Agreed
Synapse luxury
Time was once now twice thrice more
Whipping bones arch press
Leaf
/ˌsæn fɹənˈsɪskoʊ/, ::
Blasphemy!
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Haikus are so difficult to understand/read the right way..
I would call yours decent, though no clue why 😅 keep on :)
yes, i enjoy the double meaning plus the standard poetic license with metre.
Consider:
Will (yours or mine) was
or
Will it (was it) (note alliteration)
Some imagery there too -- like as a kid we went to winchester mystery house - yea that family - and they had a sink with 13 holes -- so the haiku can be about death (read 4) or the paranoia of building to avoid death, as mrs. Winchester did (or did she)
So, you. See? (By the rockets red glare) haikus can magnifisize how you think
ya think?
I think I need some sake to help my imagination.
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NOW I see it
(really, I think I got a glimpse, but still very challenging :))
now here this: https://anchor.fm/aquaqlabs/episodes/Haikus-will-save-us--not-ed135g
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