A deeper feeling of suffering sometimes it's so hard to express.It can be in the form of emotional or mental suffering.
It can also mean a feeling of being hurt or being ill.It may mean someone being annoying.The one I am trying to explain deals with emotional damage.I have experienced what it feels like being in pain and I know it's not easy to overcome.I composed a poem to express what I feel.
A deep wound i can't show around
Bites deep into the soul & spirit
Makes me feel weak and wallow in sorrow
It may be mentally,but it takes a toll on my body
Emotionally,it kills my cheerful spirit
It leading to trauma
I am giving in to depression
It's disorganizing who I really am.
Never wished you come again
Lie in the deepest part of my heart
Never surface again
Let me get the joy in exploring life again
I hope to be happy someday and forget the pain.
Great Piece. Pain well illustrated and the desire to have it buried in the deep is beautiful especially with a joy after the pain
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All of us without exception have experienced pain. It is part of our life, it is the punishment for the mortality of living.
Beautiful poem and with a lot of feeling.
Good day.