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RE: finding body in your arms

Very great poem, simply beautiful, you reminded me of a passing relationship I had, I thought it would work out but in the end we went our separate ways, I was struck by this paragraph:

fingers clawing through the country
in your skin
finding home
finding war
war of your body
against what it cannot be
war over the language in your walk

Hugs and many blessings ☺

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I'm glad I have touched you in some type of way. I hope the next effort works out better for you and the person of interest 😁