Fleeting Ties I

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The instant our eyes met,
A bond was formed
That would weave through our lives
Nurturing our connection
Onto eternity

For every word spoken
Thoughts, silent and unformed
The bond strengthens
The connection transformed
Into a timeless kinship bond

As a youngling from a whole
I became
The intricate parts of you
A woven tapestry of my life
As the magic of our connection unfolds

It should be a lifetime
Yet nothing lasts so
Your humour, your belly laughs,
Your heart, authentic and contradictory
Marks an unforgettable existence

In a dazed state
Your hopes, dreams and fears
A flashing scene before my eyes
A rage builds in my heart
As I contemplate the power of time.


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A poem about loss that touches the heart, though the word itself is never expressed directly.
Lovely and effective.
The theme of time is woven skillfully throughout.

Time, often an unfavorable element, holds a power we (I) wish we could harness. It's a pleasure to read your comment on my poem. 😊 Thank you so much. !PIMP


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It should be a lifetime
Yet nothing lasts so

Lasts about 14 years after which they grow up and become surly teenagers. Beautiful poem about the love and bond between a parent and a child.

...after which they grow up and become surly teenagers.

😂 The stage most parents would rather skip! Thanks so much for reading. !LUV

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This poem makes me miss my parents even more.. great poem keep it up 😊

😄 I'm pleased it resonates with you. That's the intention—to appreciate our bonds with our parents. Thanks so much for your visit. !PIZZA

It should be a lifetime
Yet nothing lasts so

Sad!

This poem doesn't just concern emotional relationships, it also speaks of friendships and how time is the only revealer of how it'll end. Nothing lasts a lifetime 😢.

Exactly! Well said. Thanks a lot for reading. !LUV 🙂

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What a beautiful and very sweet poem. There is no pure and selfless love than between beings who love each other, Fathers and sons.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.

There is no pure and selfless love than between beings who love each other,...

I quite agree! Thanks for your insightful comment. 🙂 !PIZZA

Very nice and beautiful poem, it's impossible not to be moved as you read it, that beautiful connection between parents and children is simply unique, thank you for this sweet piece ♥

What a lovely comment. Indeed the parent-children connection is special. Thanks so much for your visit. 🙂 !PIZZA

What a lovely comment. Indeed the parent-children connection is special. Thanks so much for your visit. 🙂 !PIZZA

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This poignant poem beautifully captures the profound impact of a deep connection between two individuals.

Yea, it does. Thank you for reading. 🙂
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