Egos on Fire (Original Poetry)

in Blockchain Poets2 years ago

Egos on Fire - Original Poetry by Krisz Rokk

You think you’re an empath?
I will never follow your guidance!
This is when their worlds clashed. Again.
It happened so fast, you could hear the silence.
 
A dense atmosphere filling the room
Causing love and joy to withdraw
Sending distorted signals into the dune
Changing colors of the kaleidoscope before dawn.
 
This time it’s on you
To come forward and choose
What amnesty do you offer?
Something my heart can’t refuse?
 
I longed for your warmth
Offering hugs and kisses
Waiting for you to transform
And realize that I was always there for you.
 
A burning desire awakened our souls
Sending the egos on a stroll
Flooding hearts with endless love
Breaking another set of patterns
Engraved in our thoughts.
 
A powerful release of energy followed
Propagating shock waves through the system
Aligning feelings and emotions
To captivate the kingdom of wisdom
Into a colorful myriad of explosions.
 
Am I grateful? Am I blessed?
It’s up to you to guess.
For some it’s difficult to digest
Those who’re humble will invest
Into a magical life of growth and progress.
 
💎💎💎 Krisz Rokk 💎💎💎


Creative art: AI-generated image by iFeherArt via Midjourney

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First of all, the art work you used is really really captivating..it has a way of contributing perfectly to your piece of poetry.

Ego and healthy relationships are two parallel lines. I believe that for one to have a healthy relationship, ego should be dropped and you potrayed that in your poem.

Thank you for sharing with us✨

Yes, the image truly manages to captures the essence of what I'm trying to convey in my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for dropping by.

It's always a pleasure ✨

What a thought-provoking poem that focuses on the beauty of relationships! By beauty, I mean both the good and unpleasant parts of it.

Relationships can be complex especially when emotions are in play and you captured it beautifully with imageries like "dense atmosphere filling the room" and "changing colors of the kaleidoscope".

Ego is one relationship-killer and once sent "on a stroll", hearts are flooded with endless love. I love this! !LUV 💕

Experiencing love on different planes makes our journey in this 3D world more meaningful. The polarity split love-ego and the resulting attraction between opposites to unite is the essence for growth.

Thank you so much for your kind words and lovely comment.


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