Lovely poem with nice rhythm and imagery. It has a very gentle feel to it like a feather swaying
On the wings of this breeze
carrying the scent of jasmine petals!
Lovely poem with nice rhythm and imagery. It has a very gentle feel to it like a feather swaying
On the wings of this breeze
carrying the scent of jasmine petals!
Thank you so much for your beautiful words! I love how you described it as a feather swaying; it captures exactly the mood I was hoping to convey. Jasmine petals on a breeze truly have a magic of their own. I'm so glad the poem resonated with you!🥰