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RE: "Gazes" (Original Poem)

in Blockchain Poets3 years ago

A sensuous poem full of yearning for a distant love.

I stared at your shades,
at your intense color change.
I was assured,
you, I want to explore.

It's a haunting piece because one feels like the narrator is full of longing for a love that never quite materializes or it's impossible. Excellent!

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Thank you so much. I am happy that you could relate to it. I was out of connection for a very good time, it is good to be back. I am sorry for replying so late. One month is a good time.