I liked the way that "It all brings me back/ to the loneliness that sparked / so many dreams" captures the complex mix of feelings involved with nostalgia. The "it plays like a movie. / Then leaves me wanting." also struck me as being strong on that front. I liked other parts as well, but I thought those parts especially helped convey the theme.
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I love the sense of nostalgia this poem emits. "The sight of the sun is a fleeting sparkle" is also a brilliant line that I think makes one feel like one of the greatest things in our life can become tiny if you look at it the wrong way.
I liked the way that "It all brings me back/ to the loneliness that sparked / so many dreams" captures the complex mix of feelings involved with nostalgia. The "it plays like a movie. / Then leaves me wanting." also struck me as being strong on that front. I liked other parts as well, but I thought those parts especially helped convey the theme.
Thank you for reading. I appreciate your kind words! I'm glad you liked it. :)
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I love the sense of nostalgia this poem emits. "The sight of the sun is a fleeting sparkle" is also a brilliant line that I think makes one feel like one of the greatest things in our life can become tiny if you look at it the wrong way.
thank you. and thank you for reading c: