This is beautifully written. I do want to learn more on how to write prose in poetry, @akumagai .
That is why prose is superior: it's voice can be stronger and more meaningful. Poetry may provide artistic freedom, but prose can showcase the true talents and voice of a writer above all else.
Thank you.
There is still hollowness in prose for me, at only two compositions there is still an echo in my head as I say the words when I write them, practice will tell if come a day when that echo will resonate.
I assume, practice makes perfect @akumagai .
🤞 Have a nice day.