Really like the first stanza of this, super effective. Could be the whole poem on its own. The rest I find rather spoon-feeds the message and less relatable. I'm probably not the intended audience though, being that I am a rabid atheist.
Really like the first stanza of this, super effective. Could be the whole poem on its own. The rest I find rather spoon-feeds the message and less relatable. I'm probably not the intended audience though, being that I am a rabid atheist.
Hi happy evening, well at least you liked some of my poem, I'm very glad about that, thanks for stopping by my post, have a great day ♥