I like the rhythm of this piece and I especially liked the metaphor of the moon lending its magic to the waves. You paint a good picture and relay the feelings of the narrator as well. Nice write!
I like the rhythm of this piece and I especially liked the metaphor of the moon lending its magic to the waves. You paint a good picture and relay the feelings of the narrator as well. Nice write!
Thanks Moe, it's always nice to see an old face that still likes coming here.