It beats fast.
It beats slowly.
Why is my heart so important?
Why don't you want to have my mind? My brain? My liver?
What is it in my heart, that you want?
Why do you want what keeps me alive?
My heart is mine, and you can't have it.
It keeps me alive.
It lets me know if I am scared, or if I am running too fast.
It is where I keep my love for myself.
Where my emotions are.
Where my tears start.
My heart is my friend, it never lies.
It warns me about the dangers around me.
To keep me away from men like you.
My heart makes me move and tells me to never stop.
The finish line is not even close.
Just keep going and don't stop.
My heart beats,
Can you keep up?
"Where my tears start." That is an awesome line. There is so much that could be said about just that one phrase alone. Really, really cool. I love the tone of the entire poem but this just really gives it all such a depth of vulnerability. Really well done!
A friend indeed. Our heart has a way of telling us that were in danger or about to make the wrong choice.
Our heart keeps us in track
It does, we need to pay attention and to listen carefully
Thanks for the kind words @wongi
Exactly dear❤️✨
Lovely poem! Its good it reflects on the importance of the heart, not just as a physical organ that keeps us alive, but also as a symbol of our emotions, love, and connection to the world around us.. Great job!
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thanks @esther-emmanuel
So many people sees there are as something that just keeps them alive, but it is so much more.
Corazón amigo sincero y fiel que no nos deja, nos da la felicidad y cuando estamos tristes nos consuela con su amor.
Bonitos versos.
Excelente tarde.
Muchas gracias @rinconpoetico7
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When we fall in love, drop our hearts on someone who is worthy and willing to accept.
And it would be better before loving other people's hearts, we should love our own hearts. Because a broken heart sometimes breaks the spirit and hope of life.
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