WAVE

[penyaircyber]

that you challenge in life
that you enjoy in time
bubbling up in the heartbeat
you want to dance on it
tidal wave tidal wave life

give me to the wave, you say
in the vast ocean without a boat
give me to the storm, you say
in the endless rain
because that's how life must be faced

wavy wave of love wavy
as you love dear
wiped the green wiped the wave
until there is no dust of memories
the waves of memories that always loom

Poem & digital painting by: @penyaircyber

Comments

[joseitosanchezs]

Very nice poem, the waves of our thoughts sometimes destroy us or make us stronger, thanks for sharing.

[nelsolin]

Deep words

[penyaircyber]

Thank you

[pixresteemer]

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[inthenow]

give me to the wave, you say
in the vast ocean without a boat
give me to the storm, you say
in the endless rain
because that's how life must be faced

I can dig this.. it speaks to me. Nicely written piece.

Have a great day/evening. 😃

[penyaircyber]

Thank you for reading

[positivesteem]

The wave of the ocean interwoven with the wave of life, great poem

[davidbright]

wavy wave of love wavy
as you love dear
wiped the green wiped the wave
until there is no dust of memories
the waves of memories that always loom

Hmmm... Great use of word.. How did you come up with that?.. To be honest, this was beautifully written.. Kudos

[penyaircyber]

Thank you. I wrote in Indonesian language and translated to English by google.

[davidbright]

I know that, I meant how you came up with the use of your words especially the wavy wave of love wavy and the wiped the green wiped the wave.. I love the sound of that..

[penyaircyber]

I like to write words repetition in my Poems. It can make sound in poems. You can try this in your native language, and translated to English.

[davidbright]

Now I understand.. It sounds nice though.. Maybe I will try it one of these days.