Screens glow
a quiet hum
words weave deep
inspiration
strangers
to kindred souls
a tapestry of ideas
pixelated realms
each voice
each story dear
Instagram dazzles
but Hive reveals
we journey far
travellers of thought
mundane
profound
in every post
a spark is found
a kind word
an honest share
foreign friendships
sacred space
heart of words
in Hive’s embrace
This is really nice. I love this space too, or most of it anyway, especially the international travel I can do and friendships.
Thanks for your comment it meant a lot to me.
There is "a quiet hum" to this poem that I really enjoy, a soft, gentle laying out of phrases. I think that is produced by your word choices, like the word 'dear' and 'share' and 'embrace', but also the gentle rhythm comes from the fact that every line contains a single noun phrase (or single adjective), very well done in sticking to that throughout. Looking at it I have to believe it was a deliberate organizational scheme. A nice poem and it is true that Hive is unique (and more serious minded) among social medias.
Thank you for your generous comment