your poem is a moving exploration of existential themes. We are doomed drew me in and I liked the line the only way to victory is death. As for being sheeple! A minor feedback is that the odd comma here and there might serve to make this an even better poem. Like after formed, self and win, for example. Your voice has an engaging depth that resonates I hope you keep exploring these themes.
Wow! Thank You for your feedback. I like how well you engage every line of the poem.
I'm still learning poem, so my style of translating words may be odd