What a beautiful poem/lyrics. Your use of sensory details is especially noteworthy, 'Sunlight filters through curtains' and 'the world soaked in melting snow' evoked for me vivid visuals, I could see, feel, and almost breathe in the changing seasons. a wonderful metaphor for emotional transformation.
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Thank you, I think I wrote a good poem, although it took a long time😊