I really like the sentiment of your poem, and how we have both used words and books in our poems. The metaphor of ink as a medium for capturing love and it's impermanence is lovely. It flows very well and I enjoyed the repetition of lying. It left a lasting impression on me.
Thank you. I do appreciate your thoughtful response. I like the fact that there was some sort of similarity in our poems. I would like to read more of your work. and it was nice having you stop by.