your narrative arc comes through strongly - moving from the father's regret, moving through the daughter's growing awareness, to their eventual confrontation. I think this is its greatest strength and made the piece very active and lively.
your narrative arc comes through strongly - moving from the father's regret, moving through the daughter's growing awareness, to their eventual confrontation. I think this is its greatest strength and made the piece very active and lively.
Yes. You are right, that point where she confront the father, asking him of the truth, is the point, where the exposition came out, and the poems make a straightforward sense.