A nice love poem though, for me, it wanders about a bit.
I wonder if focusing on only a few images in the redraft will nartow the scope a little
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A nice love poem though, for me, it wanders about a bit.
I wonder if focusing on only a few images in the redraft will nartow the scope a little
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. I might work it a bit more on it in a later draft.