Another excellent piece. I really enjoy how you're expressing your thoughts here. Nice half rhymes with assonance:
'The roses you see to me show forth thorns,
What feeling is needed to achieve my turns.'
This is something you have expressed throughout.
It's a state of mind, it's a process as we 'achieve our/my turns'.
Remember writing is a way to shine light to dark. Keep it going bro.
Thanks a lot. I really appreciate 🙏🏻... You write very good too, and I'm always looking forward to seeing more from you 💯💯💯