I very much enjoyed reading this it chugs along at a nice pace. Quatrains are set out really well lots of nice poetic devices
'Unity is virtue to the hearts that accept,
Below lives division at a much farther depth.'
Nice use of internal rhyme, assonance and alliteration especially in this stanza, really musical. Nice.
Thanks very much. Really glad you liked it ❤️❤️❤️