Very much enjoyed reading this poem. Nice play on words here
'One restless dawn, unable to suppress the itch
of wanderlust, with a heavy door left ajar
semi-deliberately, and a new light teasing in
The harmonic 't' sound it used really well. I also am a big fan of tercets.
Thank you.
Thanks, man, for your close attentions and encouragement :)
Would you believe I was unconscious of what you pointed out? Poetry writing is something of a trance for me, verging on possession and exorcism. I appreciate your noticing/pointing out the in-built music.
Wishing you success with your own creative work 🙏