I Told Her, Shut Up!

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Hush. I tell my heart.

Emotions don't lie, that I presume and so I tell her to shut up.

On heartbreak, she's got the feelings
Self-depreciation, she's equally experienced.
Disrespected, oh she had gotten enough shares from that too.

Yet, she gives a room to another. The worst that happened, was how fixed it it.

How wrong could it go further than a planned future already corrupted with thoughts of a plus one, I ask her, who gave the key to that door?

She breached the agreement not to mention how she fell so deeply into one-sided emotions.

The good thing is she knows how doomed this could be if things go south and I hope she would be prepared to face the outburst, or I hope she hush up, lock that door, and throw the key into the deepest part of the sea never to be found again.

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I love the internal conflict played out in a metaphoric lamentation of an argument. Nice poem.

I liked the structure of the poem and the arrangement of words especially in stanza 3 - On heartbreak, Self-depreciation, Disrespected,
You're left feeling like they wish the door would be locked but I don't hold out much hope.

Good one from such perspective of self and internal conflict.

Oh thank you.

There is not much hope and possibility for a closed door.