Photo by Matt Hardy
Turbulent Water
Like the ocean waves,
It rises and falls with ease
One moment it's up high
The next, it's on its knees
The market's unpredictable
It ebbs and flows like the tide
One can never tell
When it'll change or subside
Investors ride the waves
Hoping for a surge to come
But sometimes it falls too hard
And they're left feeling numb
So let us ride the waves
And enjoy the highs and lows
For in this game of chance and risk
It's the ride that truly glows
Hah! Great piece. I liked the rhythm and seamless rhyme scheme. Nice work.
thank you :)
Great analogy! The market's fluctuations are like the ocean, unpredictable and ever-changing. We must embrace the ride and enjoy the highs and lows.
probably a fair summation of how most people view investment.
good work
Thank you for the kind words <3
Very nice poem, I liked that great analogy of the waves with the investments, direct and precise, excellent writing, thank you =)
thank you
Free market poetry. Love it. :)