Amazing! This poem told a story not to short and not too long, showing both the good and bad and flaws, this is my favorite kind. The words flowed really well, the topic was shown clearly and not vague, it kept me occupied. Great work!😄
Amazing! This poem told a story not to short and not too long, showing both the good and bad and flaws, this is my favorite kind. The words flowed really well, the topic was shown clearly and not vague, it kept me occupied. Great work!😄
I'm glad you liked it. It's fun to take topics that no one wants to touch and make a beautiful poem from it.