This is just beautiful! The words and the rhymes, every sentence speaks clear and elegantly about the pain and hope there is. Usually I skim, just to repeat reading again for the sake of sincerity, whenever I read poems where words don't exactly flow like rhymes, I get that it does not always have to be like that, but when a a work like this pops up I'm amazed. The idea, intent and how it just flows from the start to finish captures me. The delivery was great.😀
I'm happy about the compliment and the fact that you picked one or two messages from the poem. It is true that rhymes have a way of keeping readers glue from the beginning to the end. Thanks for stopping by.