WAITING

[vision-of-esca]

Waiting for the night without shooting stars

I want to make a wish to meet you

Waiting in the moonless night

I want to express my thoughts to the moon

Waiting for the sleepless night

I want to rush to the place where you are in my dreamland

Waiting on a rainy day without the sun

I want to tell you that the rain may be my tears

Waiting under the sky without white clouds

I want to tell you that my heart wanders with the white clouds

Waiting where you used to live

I want to see you and come back occasionally

Waiting in the space where I once met you

I want to reminisce about the warm scenes that were once

Comments

[trifecta-tt]

Beautiful poem. I love the nostalgic imagery that this evokes.
I particularly like the line, I want to tell you that the rain may be my tears

[vision-of-esca]

carve longing through meaningful words

[johnbenn]

Taking our minds to a place we really want, can be a great feelings. Especially when we finally get there, it can feels much love about us.

[joseitosanchezs]

Very good writing I loved it, sometimes dreams are much better than reality, especially if it does not make you forget the bad things for a moment, thanks for sharing.