I can't hold it in anymore
implode or explode
It doesn't matter
It ends tonight
These last lines sound like the words a person says before they commit suicideš.
Eitherways, I like the progression of the poem. It sounds like a person in distress. A person who is on the verge of giving up.
Yeah, you're right. It's what the poem was all about. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Thank you
It's always a pleasure š¤āØ