Más cerca de la luna (Versión Esp/Ing)

Hoy la luna se refleja,
en tu mirada, en mi.mirada;
la busco pero falta
mi optimismo y tus ansias.

Absorta en mis pensamientos,
la observo en la distancia
y me provoca ese beso,
que me diste, pero no basta.

Pongo mi suerte en tus palabras,
pero tu mirada, quieta pasa
y resuelvo tu ausencia,
mientras en secreto me abrazas.

Hoy logro echar mi suerte,
desde tus deseos y mi nostalgia,
creyendo que en mis versos
la agonía ya no es nada.

Créditos
Acércate a mi luna!
Espero tus comentarios, será mi crecimiento.
Traductor: deepl
Foto tomada con mi Xiaomi Redmi 9a.

Closer to the moon

Today the moon is reflected,
in your look, in my look;
I'm looking for it but it's missing
my optimism and your desires.

Absorbed in my thoughts,
I watch her in the distance
and that kiss provokes me,
that you gave me, but it's not enough.

I put my luck in your words,
but your gaze passes quietly
and I resolve your absence,
while you secretly hug me.

Today I manage to cast my luck,
from your wishes and my nostalgia,
believing that in my verses
The agony is nothing anymore.

Credits
Come closer to my moon!
I await your comments, it will be my growth.
Translator: deepl
Photo taken with my Xiaomi Redmi 9a.

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Cuántos misterios aún nos brinda la luna y que lindo es inspirarse en ella. Está lindos tus versos.

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