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Thanks. Hope I didn't make any mistake? Or do you think adjustment is needed somewhere?

Oh there's probably a few grammatical errors but I wouldn't bother with that. The fact I reblogged it showed how much entertainment you delivered... I don't reblog things that are no good. You made me laugh ALOT. Funniest thing I've read in Hive in ages.

Yea, I noticed it after posting because, I lost the first one I properly organized. E.g, instead of cane, I wrote Cain. Please don't expose me. Else, If you do, I must tell your mummy for you. Lolz.

Thanks for the cool notification. Will improve.

No need to apologize or improve! Hive doesn't need perfect grammar and we are a global community that knows not everyone has perfect English! Originality, effort, individuality, humour, creativity - that's more important!

Am impressed. Thanks. Hoping to do more than expected