"I Thought It Would Be Zombies..." #1 Page #2

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I showed a pretty complete work-in-progress preview of this page recently but went on to add a bit more texture & detail as well as doubling up the shadow layer on the ladies to better reflect the light source behind them. And of course, I had to add Sarah's frustrated profanity!

With this update I should now be settled into the rhythm of releasing a new page every Wednesday. So stick around for those and other upcoming announcements, previews, and content related to "I Thought It Would Be Zombies..."

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A thought: if the text is done on a computer (rather than hand-drawn), maybe consider using em dashes rather than two hyphens?

Comics lettering is a discipline all its own that I'm trying to learn alongside everything else! 😆 Interestingly it’s evolved its own rules and visual "language." Em dashes are occasionally used in comics from the U.K. but aren't used in American comics. Good eye for detail though, as you made me think about it and I may change this to an ellipses. The double hyphen is used in place of semi colons or as a representation of a character getting interrupted. Ellipses are used to represent a character's speech fading in and out due to something like this case of injury/delirium. It's a tough call as I think of it as the character making a deliberate pause as he ascertains what he sees (double hyphen) but he's definitely addled as well making a case for (...) 🤔

Lol...her dog doesn't really care much but it was wondering what her mistress was up to. I love that look in its eyes.

Looking good. There's a lot of details just in that one frame. Keep it up.

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