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Writers should ask themselves: does every word serve a purpose? For instance, phrases like "she whispered quietly" can be condensed to “she whispered,” as the act of whispering inherently implies a lack of loudness.
Aiming for clarity often leads to stripping down complex sentences into straightforward, digestible thoughts. Once this stage is complete, writers can project themselves as confident and competent thinkers.
Tantalization: Hooking the Reader
The opening sentence of any piece bears significant weight. Zinsser asserts that if the first sentence fails to engage, the likelihood of the reader continuing diminishes. Thus, spending time on crafting an engaging introduction is pivotal.