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RE: Money Game is Invisible

in LeoFinance3 years ago (edited)

Sorry because my writing does not align with your high teacher standards. I am an amateur writer, and English is not my native language. But I try to do it as good as I can.

Even worse is redundant information, I got to be a teacher for a while, it was very frustrating that I had to be the one to teach redundant information to students, I had to leave the job because I couldn’t cope.

I am very aware of this. My girlfriend is a teacher, too. She found it very hard to face this similar problematic

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Sorry because my writing does not align with your high teacher standards.

Haha oh please I was merely only suggesting, sorry if my suggestion didn’t come out right. And you write very fine, this is an awesome post with lots of truth in it, a lot of truth many are oblivious to, lot of truth many are ignorant about. I wonder how many people go around dragging on the wrong energy by being in the wrong company which is diminishing their light. I can relate a lot to this writing and I appreciate that you shared it.

All is good brother. I seriously respect critics. I will look into paragraphing more and more to implement it better in my future posts. This was a first one after a long period of time, it will get better. Thank you very much for the support and re-blog. Appreciate it a ton!

so is it any better now? Lmao, be honest with me. I can take it

It’s so much easier to read and follow through now. Could even be better with some pictures, honestly ☺️