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RE: WOO Token Airdrop Coming For City NFT Holders

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Love the idea, but I will suggest that the team dial back the—what I assume to be—the ChatGPT "make it exciting" tone/prompt.

most epic and exhilarating event of the year

Really? Moreso than the game's release?

thrilling 30-day journey that will leave you on the edge of your seats

Really? Edge of my seat?

this incredible opportunity to be part of the WOO revolution

We've been airdropping stuff for a year now... the only "incredible" thing here is how much overselling this phrasing is doing.

The excitement is palpable
will have you feeling like a true wrestling champion!

Please don't tell me me what I am feeling... makes you sounds VERY corporate.

@wrestorgonline, I love ya's, I'm invested, and I want to see you succeed. As you get bigger and draw more eyes (and serious ones from the bigger non-crypto market you're into), it's important that you have a handle on your comms, tone, and approach to the written word.

The wild overzealousness of this announcement doesn't make me excited, it makes me cringe a little.

Cheers!! <3

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@bookerman was gone for over a week dealing with a funeral so we had to assign someone this task and ChatGPT pumped out what it pumped out. It is what it is.