My fingerpad rests in the hollow
Where your lower ribs meet
'It's yours if you want it' you say
Decades later I'm cool with sleep
Coaxing me to your morning warm skin
Still you say it's mine, always.
My fingerpad rests in the hollow
Where your lower ribs meet
'It's yours if you want it' you say
Decades later I'm cool with sleep
Coaxing me to your morning warm skin
Still you say it's mine, always.
How do you get line breaks?
I just press "Enter" on my keyboard twice
Two spaces
enter
at the end of the line
Thanks! What a mess - was doing my head in!
What
@ifarmgirl-leo&@cliffagreensaid.Also, the HTML code
<br />adds a line break:<br />breaks a line (good for poetry)<br /><br />breaks a line and adds a blank line (good for multi-paragraph list items).Thanks!!!
Oh wow... That's so sweet and beautifully romantic🥰
I don't normally do romantic poetry but @boxcarblue made me feel a bit soppy haha.
There’s a time and a place for everything.
I’m glad my poem sparked something in you.
And it's really beautiful. Too short but the story is there and vivid too :)
Sweet. I like the word 'still': you're using it in the sense of continuation, but it evokes the stillness of the moment too, in my reading.
OH! It does too. Sometimes words are chosen intuitively, without real thought - and when they work, it's a pleasure.