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RE: A Series of Freewrite Haiku

in Bananafish4 years ago

I love this!! And yes, where, oh where, are you @bananafish?

LOVE this:

my words came to rest
on a prison cot
starved and lonely

and community, and inspiration, and this:

we climb up
the bandwidths
of each other

Thank you for the haikus, busy as you are, and the freewrites. You are a great role model and inspiration!

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All the main people in @bananafish seem to have left. None of them are posting at all, and one account is closed. I wonder what happened? Bummer. I guess I'll take my delegation back. I don't want to.

Over there, where the last houses give way to tall grass, there is a lone cherry tree. Lingering petals and diligent insects have hidden the rough stone beneath which the Bananafish lies, carrying with itself stories, dreams, laughter and other strange alchemical concoctions. Even the children no longer play under the old cherry tree, whose rotting caresses imprint the rhythm of forgotten songs on the stone, in an eternal, ephemeral sob.

The "rotting caresses" of the lone cherry tree....???
Imprinting the stone with forgotten songs... an eternal, ephemeral sob.....
Where is the rising Phoenix?
#bananafish must live on!!!!